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asdfghjkl;; Awww, what a cute character, and with a cute name to match~ ; 3 ;!
Firstly, I must say that I LOVE the way you draw hands~! :iconloveloveplz: The fingers are so slender and elegant and your anatomy is fantastic; many people find that hands can be the hardest part of the human body to draw but from my perspective; you can draw hands with about as much difficulty as drawing squiggly lines~! >u<
The hair is lovely, so smooth and flowy...I like the creamy look it has to it~ And that shine...*q*! Hehe; I love that Yuiko plays with it absent-mindedly as she daydreams~ :giggle:
Everything here is shaded and highlighted well, anatomy and proportioning is pretty good too...but one thing bugs me~ xD
The huge area of shading in front of her; it looks a little like she smeared charcoal everywhere and it isn't as neat as the other shaded areas~ ; 3 ;
Perhaps, if there was a background of some kind, or even a type of fabric she could lean on, the shading in front would look neater and less like a rushed mess~ >v<;;
Well; even though this was more like a massive comment than a critique, I hope it helps somewhat!
Keep up the stunning work, dear~ <333 :huggle:
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XMireille-chanX Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thanks for the critique Cakey~ <333
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CakeChub Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconzxcvbnmplz: You're welcome, Mir~ :huggle:
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